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Sunday, 11 October 2015

Sheep are not supposed to be ridden on!

              
Sheep riding


I am against this idea of Sheep riding because it is cruel.
I want to persuade farmers not to encourage others to ride on sheep.
Sheep shouldn't be ridden on because it is dangerous for the person and the sheep. And there are no equipment for sheep riding because they could fall off and hurt themselves.
People could harm the sheep and there would be no more sheep. It is dangerous for the sheep because the person could fall and break their arm or get other injuries. People could even hurt the sheep’s leg or spine, which could cause permanent damage and it might not be able to walk properly.
Sheep riding should be banned because sheep riding can be dangerous and it could injure the sheep.

We are learning to understand and follow the persuasive writing structure.
I know I can do this when I plan and write a persuasive writing about why sheep riding should be banned.

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